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2013-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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1. Describe the persuasive presentation that you will need to give in the near future. Who will you try to influence to do what? Provide enough detail that I understand the situation clearly. : I have to make a TF team for the development of new environmental products to be sold next year. I must order my junior members to take part in my TF team and they gonna get a lot of overtime. Answer the following questions about the listeners in your event. 2. Because of the knowledge level of your listeners, you will need to. . . : They do not fully understand about new project and be slow to adapt for using new tools and place at special TF room. So, firstly help to understand our project with visuals and have ice breaking time and dine together with other new team members.

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Hi, [이름]! I\'m calling you now. Your line is busy. Well, here\'s the first part. Let us talk about this in class. [이름], just check my feedback for Nov.13\'s class. I will sort out everything there after you\'re done with your answers. _Klein 1. Describe the persuasive presentation that you will need to give in the near future. Who will you try to influence to do what? Provide enough detail that I understand the situation clearly. >>Describe the persuasive presentation that you will need to give in the near future. Who wil you try to influence to do what? Provide enough details so that person may understand the situation clearly.: I have to make a TF team for the development of new environmental products to be sold next year. >>I have to make a TF Team for the development of new environment products that will be sold next year. >>I have to make a TF Team for the development of new environment-friendly products to be sold next year. >>I have to make a TF Team for the development of new environment-friendly products that will be sold next year. I must order my junior members to take part in my TF team and they gonna get a lot of overtime. >>I must order my junior members to take part in my TF Team, so they are bound to work overtime for many days.Answer the following questions about the listeners in your event. >>Correct2. Because of the knowledge level of your listeners, you will need to. . .: They do not fully understand about new project and be slow to adapt for using new tools and place at special TF room. >>They do not fully understand everything about the new project so they I will help them slowly adapt to the new working environment by using new tools in a special TF Room. So, firstly help to understand our project with visuals and have ice breaking time and dine together with other new team members. >>The first step is to make them understand what the project is mainly about using visuals with ice breakers prior to the lecture. We can also informally talk about the project as we dine in with some other team members.

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